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[唯美纯爱] 【归还世界给你改写】1-4章

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2022-9-7 01:16  显示全部帖子
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个人觉得对女主的描写形象刻画其实不太好，过于专注外表和服饰细节啦，而且往往对一个场景的刻画文字太多 难以延伸，其次，对男主的描写目前来看，太舔狗了，咋肉都还没吃到呢。对新手来说，算正常水准，还有潜力写的更好，希望作者加油。
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