[禁忌之恋] 【迷奸姐姐】（聪明的姊姊）作者：不详

hanchi6 该用户已被删除	1楼大中小发表于 2010-4-4 12:06 显示全部帖子 0 情节在前面的铺陈上面做的不错，但是结尾有些仓促，美中不足。其实这种题材的文章，最重要的地方就是对人物心里逐步变化，主人公之间纠葛等等微妙的地方。如果处理得当，即是美文，如果性爱场面文字描写的唯美，即是优秀的H文！
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