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原帖由 bwf 于 2007-6-7 03:20 PM 发表
thank master supply so nice anti-virus softword that make my dream come ture!:s_8:

thank somebody for doing something，supply应该加ing，而且提供最好用provide；
softword应该是software，既然software是单数，应该加冠词a，make应该是makes；
另外，这里不应该用so that，应该用such that，因为that前面是名词；
ture应该是true。

整句话应该是 Thank master for providing such a nice anti-virus software that makes my dream come true.